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Mary Pierce's avatar

Been there. Perfect picture.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you for reading and commenting, Mary. I think we’ve all been there at one time or another.

Daniel Henderson's avatar

Within boredom there is an opportunity for innovative discovery through attempts at easing it.

Apollo's Lyre's avatar

I read the news today, oh boy

Four thousand holes in Blackburn, Lancashire

And though the holes were rather small

They had to count them all

Now they know how many holes it takes to fill the Albert Hall♪

Aaron Waddell's avatar

Great Beatles reference!

Apollo's Lyre's avatar

Thank you! I am the Liam Neeson in Taken of obscure Beatles jokes. I don't have a lot of money or skills, but if you need a recondite Beatles reference about counting holes, I am your man!

It really is a great song tho haha

Aaron Waddell's avatar

Now I know where to go!

Thanks for “fixing a hole where the rain gets in”,

and brightening my day,

as does the Sun that now comes!

House of Neglected Poetry's avatar

Boredom, that great temptress!

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Boredom can lead to trouble, M,M.

Aaron Waddell's avatar

Wow! That ending grabbed me. So how many are there???????

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

The poem remains silent on this, Aaron. If you do any research, let us know—Thank You!

Sea's avatar

Paul, this one grabs because it puts you right there—in the same frame of mind you are when you are just lying there—counting the squares or the holes. It’s vacant.

“I choose

to remain

silent”

Swoosh.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Sea - I think the poem is meant to capture a moment that most people can relate to.

Thanks for sharing it!

Trevor Louis's avatar

It's interesting how often times I hate finding myself in boredom while on other times I crave it strongly. You'd think the best ideas come in boredom but sometimes they come (in my experience) when I'm busy in the middle of something different altogether. It's confusing. I like boredom, anyways.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks for reading and commenting, Trevor.

david wells's avatar

Ve haf vays of making you talk, Herr Wittenberger!

Monica P.'s avatar

I’ve counted like that. Even how many square ceiling tiles there are, and how many have spots from a water leak. It begs me to ask myself - why can’t I just be.

Malcolm J McKinney's avatar

If a recount gives the same number

Reality hasn't shifted

Yet.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Excellent observation, Malcolm!

Malcolm J McKinney's avatar

And when that check becomes compulsion,

We have modern society.

Lique's avatar

You continue to amaze me!

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Lique, I appreciate your comment!

Patricia Andrews (WA)'s avatar

Well.This is a purely ironic analysis 😉: Love the bit about calculating number of holes in the ceiling. Confess to having done that in several math classes many e years ago. Of course, there’s always staring intently at the eyebrows of the speaker (or commenter, such as myself)! It can help with the listener’s focus.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you for reading and commenting, Patricia. I don’t remember counting holes but I do remember counting tiles once while I was in hospital.

Patris's avatar

I’ve done this - shamefully at an orchestral venue. Ceilings are stand-in’s for clouds after all…yes?

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

You may be right, Patris.

Sure Turner's avatar

Perhaps your silence is most telling of all...

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

There is that, Sure

Richbee's avatar

Boredom allows the mind to run free just for fun. Have counted ceiling tiles.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

So have I, Richard.

Stanley Wotring's avatar

A little boredom creeping in to the relationship, perhaps?