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Richbee's avatar

Not a cross word to be said. Yet your words build a fortress in my head. Stones not to throw but to use and build a writer’s career . Best of your poems Paul.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you for the encouragement, Richard!

david wells's avatar

Reading is the Portal to the Multiverse, Paul

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Reading is the portal to everywhere and every when

Patris's avatar

“Everywhen” should be a word.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Yes, “elsewhen,” too’

Patris's avatar

Definitely

Saumya Sharma's avatar

Do not forget to read between the lines too. . .

Richbee's avatar

A I generated picture. Awesome. You are an inspiration.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I used the text of the poem to generate the image. It was 1 of 2 and I picked this one because it is both bridge- and cairn-like

Bonnie Canelakes's avatar

Another great image! 👏🏻👏🏻 And wonderful words, of course.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Bonnie - Good to hear from you!

Bonnie Canelakes's avatar

Welp, I have a Cairn Terrier. Always been fascinated by cairns of all kinds.

Stanley Wotring's avatar

Remember reading is fundamental.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks for reading, Stan!

Diane BF78's avatar

Perfect💙

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Diane - Sight seems to be much better—Thank You!

Diane BF78's avatar

Great! Protect eyes from windy grit—sunglasses!

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Will do - My prescription from 4-6 years ago is almost perfect, but still a bit too strong. I have optometrist visit scheduled for month's end and I' should Know where we are at by then.

Anu Prabhala's avatar

I will! I just subscribed:) Beautiful.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Anu, and Welcome!

Fotini Masika's avatar

The view is striking!

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Fotini. It's an AI-generated image but I think it turned out well

Fotini Masika's avatar

I never crossed that bridge, but these you built each day with your words I dare to cross, and I must admit that the view is quite breathtaking. Thank you, Paul!

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you for the generosity of your words, Fotini!

Leon Brown, Jr.'s avatar

I like it!

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Leon—Nice to hear from you again!

Patris's avatar

On that bridge with these words, Paul.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

We can all be on that bridge, Patris!

David Donoghue's avatar

A wonderful image in words and words of an image.. excellent.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, David, I appreciate your comment.

Thomas Rist's avatar

Well, there’s a coincidence. I wrote a (different) poem called “Cairn” some years ago - it won me a minor competition (it’s here if you’re interested: https://www.mountaineering.scot/assets/contentfiles/pdf/mwc2005poetry1.pdf). Meantime, I like your poem!

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you for sharing your poem, Thomas. Cairns are often thought of as markers and memorials, piled atop the earth from which they came, but they always point upward, skyward, to something transcendent.

Daniel A Detwiler Ph.D.'s avatar

A poem that leads to the world of its’ author. That is a great place to be. Daniel

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Daniel. Nice to hear from you again!

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Fantastic -- and that image!

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Yeah, it’s an AI image but the poem itself was the prompt used to create it. It was 1 of 2 renderings and I chose it because it represents both cairn and bridge

Jonathan Potter's avatar

Yep, a clever AI rendering.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks to @Darienne for sharing this-I’m grateful!