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Thank you for this restack, @Simone Senisin

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Thanks for the share, @Lique

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Thanks for sharing this poem, @Lor

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You are very welcome, Paul. I am on my third time through and still find a different meaning. You’ll be the first to know when I’ve figured that out 🤔

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Happy to read your comments this morning, Lor! 🙏😊

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Thanks, @Teresa Gonzales, for sharing this poem.

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Good Monday, @Maureen Doallas, and thank you for sharing this poem.

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And a return Good Monday to you, Paul.

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Thank you, Maureen.

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Good morning, @rena, and thank you for the restack. Seems we’re all thinking about live today.

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Good Monday, @Portia, and thank you for sharing this poem.

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Good Monday and a fabulous week to you, Paul. Your poem made me cry with longing and joy.🩵

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Thank you, Portia 🩵🩵

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Thanks to Diane and @Blue Citizen 77 for this restack.

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This is terrific Paul. I was just writing about love myself. Here's to the wholehearted lovers!💞💞

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Good morning, Rebecca. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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can’t speak - or write. such truth in this beauty … the feeling very nearly overwhelming..believing this too..

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You were the other person who liked this poem when I first posted it in 2023, Patris. Thank you! 🙏 😊

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I remember only too well. We will be ok. 🩵🩵

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Good morning, Grace 🩵🩵

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Hope you are well 🩵

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I’m doing well, Grace. Thank you 🩵🩵

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Beautiful Paul! ❤️

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Thank you, Johanna!

Richbee's avatar

Spontaneous combustion occurs once in a lifetime à true chemical reaction. À spark of emotion that ignites the heart and soul.

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If love finds you once, chances are very good that it will find you again, perhaps in a way you don’t even recognize.

Wild Lion*esses Pride by Jay's avatar

This is so utterly beautiful even if I cannot yet access those feelings. Quite sure the me I am currently becoming has never experienced it before, given that me never existed before. And the other self, those memories still live forth.

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Thank you for reading and commenting, Jay. I think the poem is an attempt at saying that regardless of how we may try to close ourselves off from the deep emotional experience of love, even love that we feel has disappeared from our lives, it can come again, in its own time, in its own way.

Wild Lion*esses Pride by Jay's avatar

Paul, that’s how I read it. And, yes I believe that too. Just only realized these last days just how deeply separated I have been from who I was once a long long time ago as a child meant to become. And though I wouldn’t use “having lived a lie” what I lived my past almost 50 years wasn’t in any way me. And for now I need to keep these experiences separate so they are not spoiling what I can finally become.

Chen Rafaeli's avatar

I remember this poem, you know. And the illustration. The everything.

Thank you for sharing it again

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Thank you, dear Chen. You were one of only two people who liked this poem when it was originally posted on Substack in September 2023.

Jo-Ann Petrarca's avatar

This feeling will forever be in my heart!

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What a wonderful comment to read! Thank you, Jo-Ann.

Jo-Ann Petrarca's avatar

It’s true, Paul, so true!