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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

This is a deeply philosophical poem that could easily be the story of your life as a poet and the insights it has given you regarding the poetic craft. The last verse in particular is full of the wisdom that comes with age:

No mere sapling can sing its song and

think to break the forest floor.

It takes some time to learn the words

to learn the song, to learn just why

you’re singing, and who or what you’re

singing for.

Of course, it is also about trees what we can learn from them. Terrific poem, Paul.

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Richbee's avatar

A tender growth spurt occurs; deer browse, nip, and leave the sapling alone to create deeper roots. Time to grow stronger, regrow another ring, thicker bark to resist the excessive elements; bend with the wind, drink with the rain, prepare for drought times to come. Pitfalls of tromping feet. Yes ,the sapling , despite setback’s, progressively grows. If only humans could learn from its survival skills wisdom would be found from the tales of woe and leaps of positive faith in the universe.

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