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Stanley Wotring's avatar

I really like this. It goes along with how I think of the poet as a painter.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you for restacking this, @Isabella Xu

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Thank you kindly for the restack, @Kevin M

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Thanks for the restack, @The Rewind

Richbee's avatar

A tree grows in heaven

Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Love this poem.

Malcolm J McKinney's avatar

This guy is a sage

Allows sun to suggest verse

No damn fool is he

DeeDee D's avatar

sublime

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Dee Dee D!

BmG's avatar

I’m going to say that tomorrow morning 🥰

Richbee's avatar

Stand still. Does that mean you can distill your thoughts and get liquid refreshment?

House of Neglected Poetry's avatar

Love the poem... hate all things AI generated!

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks, M.M., I’ll make a note

Lique's avatar

Beautiful!

Hudson E Baldwin lll's avatar

A verbiage Van Gogh. Brilliant strokes, Paul!

david wells's avatar

The sky is a page. The ombre light works its magic before Moonrise.

Sea's avatar

I think this might be my favorite haiku by you yet, Paul. Stunning! Aargh. And here I meant to go back and catch some of the ones that I’ve missed the last week, lol

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks, Sea - Not sure you missed much, though!

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Truly, nature writes its most profound stories across the expanse above us, inviting us to read and be moved by its timeless elegance.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you for restacking, @DoctorBuzzard