Thanks for the restack, @Mike Speriosu - I wanted to get this done in as few words as possible. I think it retains little resemblance to a traditional haiku but it is 3 lines, 17 syllables and you can probably read it aloud in half a breath or less.
Thanks, Stan. I had this scheduled for a week and knew the eclipse would only be 83% visible in my area but would still be an incredible sight in the zone of totality, so I added the AI-generated image but forgot to label it as such. I went back to correct it, and lost the text and image so I had to repost but by the time that happened, Substack seemed to be having technical issues, so I had to wait. Thanks for reading again and commenting.
Thanks for the restack, @Mike Speriosu - I wanted to get this done in as few words as possible. I think it retains little resemblance to a traditional haiku but it is 3 lines, 17 syllables and you can probably read it aloud in half a breath or less.
I SAW IT!!! It looked JUST LIKE THAT!!!
Yes!
Unforgettable, otherworldly .
Simply breathtaking
it’s incomprehensible
Unforgettable
Thank you, Lor
The haiku are here: www.lightshadowandink.com Choose photography menu and eclipse photography.
Thank you
Here's a competing take:
The sky darkened.
The spring breeze moved the grass.
I saw only clouds.
I’m sure that occurred in areas across the country.
Yes. Mine.
Where is your Kigo. Have lots of info on it on my Substack.
It’s not a haiku in the Japanese tradition so no Kigo
Truth times three!
Thanks, Stan. I had this scheduled for a week and knew the eclipse would only be 83% visible in my area but would still be an incredible sight in the zone of totality, so I added the AI-generated image but forgot to label it as such. I went back to correct it, and lost the text and image so I had to repost but by the time that happened, Substack seemed to be having technical issues, so I had to wait. Thanks for reading again and commenting.
They seem to have issues a lot.
First time I’ve had an issue
“Diamond Ring Effect”!
Thanks, JRC
Thanks to @93693 for the restack
Thanks for the restack, @KMPatriot
Thanks to @The Rewind for the restack- Much obliged, Jess!
I have some photos here if you like to have a look. https://www.pictorem.com/profile/Xanda.Monteiro
Some Haiku without Kigo too!