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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Regular rest is necessary for renewal!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you for restacking this, @Geraldine A. V. Hughes

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Diane’s Blue Forum 👩‍💻's avatar

A while back I had an old-life crisis looking in the mirror wondering why I woke up one day to doubling of wrinkles. I did not cry because it’s good to have wrinkles instead of being under the grass like too many of my friends. I can also avoid mirrors on bad days😎!

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Whiskers and welts may rise and fall but underneath the creases continue to make the call and an open door awaits a wayfarer widely roamed that returns to tell the places been with open heart we see the sun rise with warmth , promises to be and sometimes see the clouds that move while we sit waiting for the knowledge knock on the door.

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Teyani Whitman's avatar

I love when poetry like yours creates such powerful images of change.

Especially this line “splits and opens to every destiny”.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Teyani

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BmG's avatar

Awoke looking at my partner of 39 years. On the wall behind him is our wedding photo. Then I read your words. Perfect ✨🎯💖

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Wonderful comment, BMG!

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Gary Spangler's avatar

Powerful, Paul!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Gary!

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Jenn's avatar

Beautiful, Paul!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Jenn!

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Jenn's avatar

You’re welcome!

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Alix's avatar

oh my! oh my!

thank you

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks, Alix!

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david wells's avatar

When Summer comes a-knocking, Paul, we must always answer the door!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Indeed, we must, David

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Elizabeth Grace Martinez's avatar

this makes me feel peaceful

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I think there is a sense of acceptance in the poem, Elizabeth, a sense of peace achieved

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Ayesha A.'s avatar

Beautiful ☀️

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Ayesha!

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Brian Funke's avatar

Paul your writing is so beautiful. I’m so happy to have met you here!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Brian—I'm happy we met here, too!

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Veronica von Bernath Morra's avatar

I loved the entire reflection. Very profound and touching. .

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Enchanting~

“This face no longer lives among empty

hearts”

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you. Gloria!

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Monica P.'s avatar

There are seasons of our life too. Thanks Paul.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

You are so right, Monica—Thank you!

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