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Troy Putney's avatar

I love the playful, reflective, self-examination happening here.

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Rich Moore's avatar

Sounds like a lovely house for a writer to write!!!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I think it might need a new roof but, as they say, it has good bones. Thank you, Rich!

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Rich Moore's avatar

Hmmm. Kinda like saying 'she's got a nice personality?' But with a house, you can remodel the stuff on the bones!

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Pamela's avatar

This is awesome Paul! 😂 a writers wit, with the edginess of punctuation while necessary can be a pain in the Asterisk!! ✌🏻

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Pamela-Glad you like it!

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Brian Funke's avatar

Fantastic poem. Such a creative idea and great execution!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Brian-Much appreciated! 😊

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Patris's avatar

Joyful

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Hannah's Signs of The Times's avatar

Beautiful ❤️

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Hannah!

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Berkana's avatar

Maravilhoso ler

Chega aqui no fundo da minha pontuação

Dos meus pontos finais de afirmação (.)

Da nossa humanidade

Da nossa caminhada

Coragem e amor

Um jornada profunda e verdadeira

O que mais importa ?

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

What matters most? Joy, Truth, Love

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Jason McBride's avatar

This was fun to read!

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man of aran's avatar

Nice to know what your preferred pronouns are! ;-)

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks for the restack, @Randy Eugene

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks for the restack, too, Brian!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks for the restack, @Cris C

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