I am an empty house, a place where all absences converge, furnished with shadows and whispers and an urge for words that try to command but will not serve.
I love the playful, reflective, self-examination happening here.
Sounds like a lovely house for a writer to write!!!
I think it might need a new roof but, as they say, it has good bones. Thank you, Rich!
Hmmm. Kinda like saying 'she's got a nice personality?' But with a house, you can remodel the stuff on the bones!
This is awesome Paul! 😂 a writers wit, with the edginess of punctuation while necessary can be a pain in the Asterisk!! ✌🏻
Thank you, Pamela-Glad you like it!
Fantastic poem. Such a creative idea and great execution!
Thank you, Brian-Much appreciated! 😊
Joyful
Beautiful ❤️
Thank you, Hannah!
Maravilhoso ler
Chega aqui no fundo da minha pontuação
Dos meus pontos finais de afirmação (.)
Da nossa humanidade
Da nossa caminhada
Coragem e amor
Um jornada profunda e verdadeira
O que mais importa ?
What matters most? Joy, Truth, Love
This was fun to read!
Nice to know what your preferred pronouns are! ;-)
Thanks for the restack, @Randy Eugene
Thanks for the restack, too, Brian!
Thanks for the restack, @Cris C
I love the playful, reflective, self-examination happening here.
Sounds like a lovely house for a writer to write!!!
I think it might need a new roof but, as they say, it has good bones. Thank you, Rich!
Hmmm. Kinda like saying 'she's got a nice personality?' But with a house, you can remodel the stuff on the bones!
This is awesome Paul! 😂 a writers wit, with the edginess of punctuation while necessary can be a pain in the Asterisk!! ✌🏻
Thank you, Pamela-Glad you like it!
Fantastic poem. Such a creative idea and great execution!
Thank you, Brian-Much appreciated! 😊
Joyful
Beautiful ❤️
Thank you, Hannah!
Maravilhoso ler
Chega aqui no fundo da minha pontuação
Dos meus pontos finais de afirmação (.)
Da nossa humanidade
Da nossa caminhada
Coragem e amor
Um jornada profunda e verdadeira
O que mais importa ?
What matters most? Joy, Truth, Love
This was fun to read!
Nice to know what your preferred pronouns are! ;-)
Thanks for the restack, @Randy Eugene
Thanks for the restack, too, Brian!
Thanks for the restack, @Cris C