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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

Terrific, Paul. Possibly your own 'Kubla Khan'.

The story of that poem is that Coleridge was in full flow, and somebody knocked on his door and he answered it and forgot the rest of the poem when that person had gone.

But isn't it interesting how some poets don't write poems - they 'arrive'. So our task is not to allow them to escape, if we can possibly help it. But having no pen, Paul, is not a great excuse!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I know, Martin. I should always be a good Scout and "Be Prepared."

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Geraldine A. V. Hughes's avatar

Oh fantastic I triple love Samuel Taylor Coleridge ! ! !

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I'm feeling ancient today, but I'm no mariner, Geraldine.

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Paul McCutchen's avatar

I don't write a lot of poems and now I know why.

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rena's avatar

Ohh nooo! I hate when that happens!

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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

I'll have to buy you a pen, and Paul, too, This is a sad state of affairs. I always knew there was no money in poetry.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I try to keep my phone with me at all times to avoid "missing out" but sometimes I forget that, too.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I always try to have something but sometimes...Thanks for reading, rena!

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Georgia B.'s avatar

Perhaps it was looking for answers? And when you didn’t have them, it said, “I will have to write my own.”

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I can't imagine a poem would come to me for answers. Poems are usually the answers to my questions!

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Diane’s Blue Forum 👩‍💻's avatar

Love this! At least now poets can verbally record their thoughts with apps!

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Patris's avatar

Would you lay a trap and capture them before they fly off? Would it render you less a poet and more a hunter?

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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

Yes, we'll call Paul 'The Poem Hunter'. Can you imagine how much money he'd make if we put a bounty on each poem? He'd catch at least one every day and break Emily Dickinson's total in no time.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I could do a TV series: The Poem Hunter. There would probably be an episode where I tripped on an iamb and injured myself

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Patris's avatar

To be revived by a sonnet

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Oh, bliss and oblivion!

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Patris's avatar

A hunter who also glows (unfairly maybe) as a magician - doves come to him as they’d seek his outstretched hand.

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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

Doves called poems and the odd hawk we can't quite figure out.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I don't know about trapping poems. They're pretty elusive and don't often show themselves and my eyes aren't what they used to be. What sort of trap could I lay to capture one?

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Patris's avatar

I think sunflowers, they might approach to watch birds gather on your threshold for a feast.

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Monica P.'s avatar

It is like me walking into a room and forgetting why I am there. It usually takes me a minute, but I comes back to me. Paul, please keep a pad of paper and a Mont Blac near you at all times. I so enjoy your poetry and don’t want you forgetting any piece of it.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Mont Blanc? Won't a BIC do or a Ticonderoga Number 2?

Seriously, Monica, Thanks for the suggestion and for your support!

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Monica P.'s avatar

Showing my age. I did love a fountain pen, but a #2 pencil works great too.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

My penmanship sucks, even when I print

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Douglas Bentsen's avatar

May all your pens be Meisterstucks with gold nibs.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks, Doug—I'll make a note!

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Lor's avatar
Aug 4Edited

I love this.

You must have had one or two ,form in a cloud. Only to be blown away by the wind.

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TheUltraContemplative's avatar

Paul, I don't know how many words, how many ideas, have been lost because I didn't write them down or recorded them in the moment. Good thoughts here, thanks, Paul.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Steve!

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Perfect !

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C.J. Heck's avatar

You are such a prolific writer, Paul, I have to presume it came back once a pen was found --or at least I hope it did.

There are times when a poem arrives wanting to be born and I'm at a soccer game, or at the grocery and I just write on whatever I can find (probably like most poets), napkins, menus, or my hand or arm. Yes, I do realize how pathetic that sounds ... (sigh)

Oh well ...

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I'm sure it will be back soon. It's hot out there and I have air conditioning (Wink)!

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Malcolm J McKinney's avatar

Not pathetic. The initial spark lights a candle. When it burns out all you have left is smoke.

It happens to me despite my precautions.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

That’s another way to look at it, Malcolm, and I thank you. At my age, sometime I get tunnel vision! 😁😁😁❤️

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

All of us!

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Malcolm J McKinney's avatar

Looking for the light at the end. Same here.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Amen, Malcolm!

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Carol L. Clark's avatar

But it's economical, right? And it saves your work for...well, as long as you keep that napkin or don't wash your hand. So, don't wash your hands before your find a sheet of paper that longs for your words.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Hahahaha, yes, Carol. But I usually copied it onto paper, or put it into the computer the first chance I got.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I do try to keep my phone with me so I can dictate or write in Notes. Sometimes I leave it at my desk when I should pick it up and take it with me.

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Carol L. Clark's avatar

Good. Preserved for posterity.

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Frederick Fullerton's avatar

Terse and powerful.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Frederick

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Words dance on the threshold of creation, fleeting as sunbeams or persistent as rain. Yet without the vessel of ink, even the most brilliant verse may slip away, unwritten.​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

It is somewhat like that, although there are other moments when I can feel a poem in the air, I know it's there, waiting to be taken down, and it stays out of sight and continues to circle, and passes over once or twice, then it's gone.

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Jamie Millard's avatar

Sometimes, if we’re lucky, we catch them by the tail!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

They can be slippery, Jamie!

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Geraldine A. V. Hughes's avatar

Poems plucked out of thin air and words found in the woods, embedded in atmosphere.

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