bolts of lightning stir a surge beneath sleeping lids mind creates the dream
And this becomes the dream. Beautiful.
Thank you, Patris
I love your linkage of lightning and dreams. A great haiku!
I Love Storms (as long as no one gets hurt)
Growing up in the south we had crazy storms that were so cool. Who needs amusement park rides when you have thunder & lightning with raindrops so large you can dodge them! Loved your writing and the pic!!
Thank you, Pamela-I've always been a fan of rain storms but I stop cheering them on when the roof starts to leak.
It certainly takes the fun out of it!!
Haiku is not
for everyone,
I like it but
I can't do it.
Very powerful and dreamy...love it
Great imagery and powerful, concentrated meaning.
And this becomes the dream. Beautiful.
Thank you, Patris
I love your linkage of lightning and dreams. A great haiku!
I Love Storms (as long as no one gets hurt)
Growing up in the south we had crazy storms that were so cool. Who needs amusement park rides when you have thunder & lightning with raindrops so large you can dodge them! Loved your writing and the pic!!
Thank you, Pamela-I've always been a fan of rain storms but I stop cheering them on when the roof starts to leak.
It certainly takes the fun out of it!!
Haiku is not
for everyone,
I like it but
I can't do it.
Very powerful and dreamy...love it
Great imagery and powerful, concentrated meaning.