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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

My thanks to @Chasey Delaney for sharing this

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Thanks for stopping by to read and comment, @Ayesha A., and for the restack!

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Good Tuesday to readers of @Diane’s Blue Forum and special thanks to Diane for sharing this poem.

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Thanks, @Paul Wittenberger 💙

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Good Tuesday, @Kathleen Hobbs snd thank you for the restack

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You’re welcome, Paul

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Thanks to @Deni for the restack

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Thanks to @Rea de Miranda for sharing this

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

My pleasure, Paul.

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Diane’s Blue Forum's avatar

“you are a light

holding me tight

against the dark chill

of the night “ may we all have that someone!

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I hope everyone does, Diane—thank you!

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

The last stanza is killer!

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My favorite lines, Stan! Thank you for pointing them out!

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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

"Night Poem" depicts two people taking solace in each other for the light their bodies carry as they venture into night's darkness together.

I missed this fine poem the first time, so I'm glad to read it now. Thanks, Paul.

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You’re welcome, Martin, glad you got to read it this time around, and my thanks for your comment!

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Geraldine A. V. Hughes's avatar

I wish, Mr. Wittenberger swoon💥It’s difficult for me to not be honest, Lady G

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And appreciate your honesty, Lady G. Thank you!

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rena's avatar

Happy anniversary tender poem

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Thank you for the Substack birthday wish! 🌻🌻

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Portia's avatar

This so fresh and sweet:

"Pressing my body

against your own

like the stuffed animal

of your childhood".

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Thank you, Portia

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Gary Spangler's avatar

This poem flows so smoothly, Paul. A bit slow on my start today, and always a pleasure reading your poems!

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Slow or fast, Gary, Thank you for taking the time to read and commenting!

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Jo-Ann Petrarca's avatar

This poem is erotically romantic. “Together we flow into the darkness, where things happen. Only because of the light and never because of darkness.”

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Thank you, Jo-Ann!

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Simone Senisin's avatar

Beautiful 🤩

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Thanks, Simone 😊

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Beautifully written, Paul!

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Good Tuesday, Rea, and thank you.

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