In the twilight of a fading day, memories merge with the sun’s last ray, and time spins on the spring of an old man’s watch, echoing the past with each tick and tock. Chiming the hour as he walks the street, silence surrounds him, profound and sweet. Each house stands still, a witness to time. Each brick, each window, a rhythm, a rhyme. He wonders if the chime is meant for him or is just another of time’s many whims. With each step forward the past seems to retreat, yet in every chime past and present meet. Time has moved through the minutes, and the hours, and the years, and through it all he’s lived his loves, his losses and cried all his tears. As night pulls the fading light closer to it, the old man ponders the infinite and wonders where it is he will finally stand between the hour and the minute hand.
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I feel this poem, the walk, the rhythm and rhyme of the houses he passes, each object just so. Time is a thing that mystifies all of us, I think. Is it real, an illusion? Science can't tell us. The infinite, I think, is a better fit.
This so great. I am not great literary terms but this piece lies on the border between poetry and prose giving you the best of both worlds.