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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, @rena for sharing this, I’m grateful

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Your words are eternal!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Stan, though the body fails, the artist leaves behind a final piece of calligraphy to mark his passing

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Mary Pierce's avatar

Read this three times. Felt something new each time. Thanks for sharing this, Paul.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

What more could the artist in the poem ask for, Mary? Thank you.

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House of Neglected Poetry's avatar

This reminds me of something Isaac Asimov once said, something to the effect, "If I knew I had only minutes to live, I would simply type faster."

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Weston Parker's avatar

May our ink long outlive us Paul.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

That’s the hope, Wes

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rena's avatar

A kind of a raging against the dying of the light

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Yes, rena

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

I sense a merging of longevity and legacy. I love what you did with this, Paul.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Rod

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Rich Moore's avatar

This really resonates with me, Paul, as my wife and I are spending the next several weeks visiting my 93-year-old mother-in-law and everyday I feel the hours slipping away from her. This getting old stuff is not for the faint of heart!!! Thanks so much for sharing this!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I hope all goes well with your visit and your presence demonstrates to your mother-in-law assures her that she is, indeed, seen by the ones who love her. Thank you for reading this and for commenting.

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Mike Speriosu's avatar

Wow, to hear these words again. To read them again. Incredible. Thank you, Paul.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks, Mike. Events being what they are, I have not been able to concentrate on writing

much, so June has not been an altogether productive month. either for writing or reading. Hope to get back to it soon, but will not force myself.

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Teyani Whitman's avatar

Legacy.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Yes!

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mitch's avatar

Great post Paul . and so very true .

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thanks for reading and commenting, Mitch

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Monica P.'s avatar

Ink makes it a lasting entity.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Monica

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

A poem that can last longer than Asian wisdom . Same ink, just splashed in a new un cryptic style. Joy raised in the spirit of an artist stroke as a sunset moment colors the sky not with India ink of darkness to come but the rising of light.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Richard

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Kimberly Root's avatar

Such a vivid image. To begin a day with.

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Thank you, Kimberly

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Francesca Bossert's avatar

Love this one!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Francesca

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Lor's avatar

May I have a moment to write my own epitaph…

Thank you Paul.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Sort of a final creative act that lives on. Thank you for reading and commenting, Lor.

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