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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Grateful to griefgratitudelovelaughter for this restack, thank you @Simone Senisin

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Thanks to @my so called life for the restack!

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My thanks to @Teresa Gonzales for sharing this!

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Thanks, @Kathleen Hobbs for this restack!

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You're welcome, Paul

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Good Monday, @Lique, and thanks for the restack.

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Lique's avatar

Good morning! and You’re Welcome!

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Good Monday, @Ross Ion Coyle, and thanks for restacking this.

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You're welcome as always!

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Good Monday, @Frankie Wylde and thanks for the restack

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Thanks, @Portia for sharing this!

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Good Monday, @Dave Karpowicz, and thanks for sharing this

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Good morning, @Deni and thank you for restacking this.

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JoshuaNearly's avatar

You always find something simple and sublime in the physical world that opens a window to the transcendent… “the sound of a loom

that shapes a pattern

it can not understand.”

I could instantly hear what I’d never heard before. Your work is filled with treasures like that. Thank you.

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That’s true, Joshua. Sometimes I see a flock of birds flying across the sky, weaving a pattern I can’t understand, but the birds certainly do.

I’m always glad to see you here, Joshua—Thanks, as always, for reading and commenting.

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Paul McCutchen's avatar

After my first marriage broke up and I was living in a house on the family farm. The house had a small front porch that faced the west and miles of flat open farmland. If I had a stressful day, I could sit on the porch drink a beer and watch the sun go down. I would do my best to let my troubles sink away with the sun.

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I can understand that, Paul.

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Chad R Herman's avatar

What simply lays unbroken. It's as if the unbroken is there only till its broken. I love this idea of seeing a future of a thing that hasn't happened yet. Great poem

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Ross Ion Coyle's avatar

Really love this one

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Thank you for reading and commenting, Ross--I appreciate it.

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Andrea Fisher's avatar

Love this Paul, it is something I feel in bones…but to see it come to life in words strengthens it! “the meaning already

present in them.”

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Thank you, Andrea.

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Daniel A Detwiler Ph.D.'s avatar

Hi Paul, this is an exquisite poem! You reveal the mystery. Also, Paul, I love your book”An Assembly of Words”! Thank you for publishing it. Sincerely, Daniel

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Thank you, Daniel. Glad the book arrived safely!

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