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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you for sharing this, @rena 🌻🌻

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Thanks to @Deni for sharing this

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My thanks to @Diane’s Blue Forum for sharing this 💙💙

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Good morning, @Portia, and thanks for the restack

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Portia's avatar

Good late afternoon, Paul, my pleasure!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Well, it’s still midsummer day isn’t it?

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Portia's avatar

It is!

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Rolando Andrade's avatar

Longing is something that always awakens a waiting, a presence of someone who is there, even if they're not. Longing is not an absence, it's a being forever

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Interesting observation, Rolando, to feel presence in absence, sort of like feeling that being ignored by someone is their subtle way of acknowledging you.

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Rolando Andrade's avatar

That's right, Paul. If someone ignores you, it's actually because there’s still a connection between the two — like an invisible web that both separates and unites at the same time, a kind of 'knot' that exists even in the absence of 'us'. These processes are fascinating.

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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

You will be waiting, but are you saying that you know her well enough to know that she won't come, even though she might might make some attempt to do so?

I like that image of the stone skimming across the water never reaching the shore.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I suspect the speaker has spoken these words more than once, Martin. I think it’s a kind of uttered hope that has a history of not panning out.

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Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

Ah, thanks to that, Paul. That makes perfect sense.

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Monica P.'s avatar

Heart wrenching. It seems to me that the person longing will never give up hope completely.

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Sam Aureli's avatar

short and sweet, to the point. hopeful, yet grounded.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Sam.

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Grace Drigo's avatar

🩵

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Good morning, Grace, and thank you 🩵🩵

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Grace Drigo's avatar

Have a good day, Paul. 🩵

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Nice. Real nice

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Good Friday, Jonathan, and thanks for reading and commenting.

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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Happy midsummer to you Paul :) It’s the longest day here and we’re all revelling in the light :)

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Jonathan, and a happy midsummer to you, as well!

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Back to the scene of the crime where your heart was stolen, all the time realizing you’re in love with someone not as committed as you!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Yes, Stan, I think there is a kind of hopelessness being expressed here, the idea that the one for whom the speaker waits is, perhaps, is only capable of only half-measures, if even that.

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Stanley Wotring's avatar

Thanks I get that feeling and I think that is what poetry is supposed to do, give you feelings.

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Jo-Ann Petrarca's avatar

Awww

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

The lightness of a skip stone across the summer surface slips away on her own without a trace to enter a world without wait.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Richard!

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

You caught me as darkness surrounded me with a cloak. Looks like we were awake at same time wondering.

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Lately, every waking hour is spent wondering, Richard.

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Claire Cayson's avatar

Oh yesPaul the waiting for love the waiting so there thank you blessing

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Manuel A Garcia's avatar

You packed a lot in this...like peeling an onion, Paul. Kudos!

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Thank you, Manuel

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Short and powerful. One single image.

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